Hey Julianna, I love that you are focusing your opportunity solution on the homeless as this is a major problem for Alachua. I am glad you included some statistics on the homeless population and how little this population is in shelters as this really shocks and grabs the audiences attention. This is a great concept and great pitch! ~Sophia Scherzer
Hi Julianna, Great job on this pitch, as it is very clear through what you had to say that you have put a lot of thought and research into your idea. The way in which you speak also conveys a clear passion for your idea which is essential for getting others to buy into said idea. The homeless population is definitely a difficult issue to solve, but your pitch absolutely made it seem that you had clear steps that you want to take to do so.
Hey Julianna,
ReplyDeleteI love that you are focusing your opportunity solution on the homeless as this is a major problem for Alachua. I am glad you included some statistics on the homeless population and how little this population is in shelters as this really shocks and grabs the audiences attention. This is a great concept and great pitch!
~Sophia Scherzer
Hi Julianna,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on this pitch, as it is very clear through what you had to say that you have put a lot of thought and research into your idea. The way in which you speak also conveys a clear passion for your idea which is essential for getting others to buy into said idea. The homeless population is definitely a difficult issue to solve, but your pitch absolutely made it seem that you had clear steps that you want to take to do so.